Most Excellent
This is one of the better flashes I've seen here. It has alot of cinematic quality. I love the different camera angles, they are done really well and make it seem like you are watching a real movie instead of a flash movie
The dialouge was very good as well, I think things are introduced well in this first episode, and it seems like the main charecters each have thier own personalities which is a very good thing
The audio was also very good, this is basically a very high quality flash. Its pretty obvious that you put alot of effort into this
I liked the closeups, but somtimes they were too close and you could see the pixelations of the sprites too clearly, which is not a good thing, its not that attractive when a charecter is too pixelated
I also felt that there were alot of unnecessary auxillary protagonists. There are about 6 charecters that stayed behind and guarded the plane. I'm not saying that you should cut them all out necessarily, I just think it will be easier for you to maybe pick 5 or 6 protaganists to be every episode charecters, and let the rest only appear every once in awhile
despite these very minor complaints, this is still one of the best flashes I've seen here.